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MD drabble - rabecka
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rabecka
MD drabble
Title: sparks in the darkness . . .
Characters: the Blessing, Jack, Rex, and uh, life on earth?
Rating: G
Spoilers: Miracle Day, all of it
Summary: What really happened, from the only one that actually knows...
AN: A bizzare little drabble with delusions of grandeur. I'd love comments. And I'm not a sensitive soul, so don't hold back if your basic reacton is WTF???

the beginning was heat and pressure and darkness . . . essence spread . . . awareness flared . . . stretched . . . emptyness . . . time and time and time . . . essence grew . . . grows . . .

something new . . . flickers . . . sparks in the darkness . . . tiny . . . few . . . what? . . . outside . . . outside?? . . . something new . . . more and more and more . . . what??? . . .

proximity . . . needs . . . needs flow . . . reflect back . . . confusion . . . comprehension . . . essence extended . . . flicker stops . . . sparks grow . . . wanted . . . wanted? . . . unwanted? . . . wrong??

something else . . . something different . . . bright . . . distant . . . come closer . . . come closer . . . come closer . . . yes . . .

comprehension . . . withdraw . . . sparks flicker . . . no . . . different . . . bright . . . close . . . clear now . . . blazing . . . space-time bending . . . beautiful . . . beautiful . . . forever . . .

another . . . linked . . . fading . . . fix . . . the template near . . . it is done . . . stay . . .

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51stcenturyfox From: 51stcenturyfox Date: September 12th, 2011 01:15 pm (UTC) (Link)
The Blessing POV fiction?

Where would you like your internets delivered? This is cool!

Love that it loves Jack, in a way. Who/what doesn't?
runzu From: runzu Date: September 12th, 2011 02:19 pm (UTC) (Link)
It took me a few reads but I get it now! Nice. I'd be a little perplexed as well if tiny being started messing with me! :P
hab318princess From: hab318princess Date: September 12th, 2011 04:09 pm (UTC) (Link)
that is awesome... and a very credible explanation imho
jcad6169 From: jcad6169 Date: September 13th, 2011 02:11 am (UTC) (Link)
cool!
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